Scene Progress

As of now, we believe our script is in good shape. We made a few updates to make the violence and aggression of the abuse scene to seem more natural. Kathleen and I have done a good job thus far of incorporating natural, conversational dialogue into our script. It flows well and seems truthful. The next step for us is putting the scripts into our bodies. Of course we need to run the science and begin to memorize, however the script seems too much in our heads right now. I think we need to do some more character development and study to understand their individual intentions.

I think a good idea would be to use Uta Hagen's verb attachment to our dialogue. I need to go into the words and begin to create my own subtext. I think my next step needs to be using a lot of text study within KK itself and then transferring that into my acting. I think I need more variety in my acting, such as more of a balance within anger, regret and longing. Uta Hagen teaches the process of acting humans and this is scene where that is important. Capturing the couple's sadness and regret is going to be very integral in the scene's success.

Something I overlooked during the first draft was Lili's desperation for Guy to go back to how he was. She loves him and wants more than anything for him to work hard for her. She wants to feel wanted and desired, she is tired of feeling alone in her home. She also is angry beyond her own comprehension. She doesn't understand why Guy isn't in love with her anymore, she is mad he can't keep a job. All of this is important to adding truth and contrast in our scene. To do this I want to analyze each line and attach reasoning for Lili's thoughts. For example, rather than constantly being angry, Lili can be regretful. I also believe in general we need to slow down. I think the lines themselves are fine, but the scenes rush. We need to identify moments of anticipation, silence and staring. This is something Kathleen and I need to work on together.

Lastly, we need to work together as a team to find ways to highlight each other. Kathleen and I need to find places to add moments of silence and longing. We need to also solidify the tech aspects and set. Where to place the blackouts and spots will put us into the world of our characters. The radio is a piece I am a little nervous about, both the throwing of it and the sound. I think Kathleen and I need to get more comfortable with each other to yell and touch each other easier. She needs to be more aggressive with me and I need to be less harsh. In total, we got good comments on our chemistry so I am excited to explore that more as we continue the scene. Our script and volume got good feedback, so the smaller things went well.